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TO: Dr. Cheri Yecke
Commissioner of Education
State of Minnesota
Roseville, MN 55112
FR: Erich Martel
Department of Social Studies
Woodrow Wilson H.S.
Washington, D.C. 20016
ehmartel@starpower.net (202-282-0120)
January 15, 2004 (revised, 1/24/04)
Solicited Review of the "MINNESOTA ACADEMIC STANDARDS IN SOCIAL
STUDIES, SECOND DRAFT, DECEMBER 19, 2003" (http://www.education.state.mn.us/content/059712.pdf
- the second draft)
(http://www.education.state.mn.us/content/059705.pdf
- summary of changes in the 2nd draft)
I thank Commissioner Cheri Yecke for inviting me to review the
Minnesota History and Social Studies Standards. Her willingness to take
the standards drafts to the people of Minnesota and make their views and
those of the external reviewers available is a model of participatory
democracy that other states would do well to emulate. I am
recommending the revision of the Social Studies Scope and Sequence to
allow more world history, the restructuring of the historical eras into
recognizable and manageable units, the correction of historical errors and
the removal of remaining behavioral goals.
What Good Standards Should Be and Not Be: Advice that Guided This
Review
"'The standards must be clear, concise, objective, measurable
and grade-level appropriate. …. they must be consistent with the
constitutions of the United States and the state of Minnesota' [Section
3, subdivision 2 (5)].
"The legislature also gave direction regarding the tests that will
be associated with the standards. These tests must 'measure students’
academic knowledge and skills and not students’ values, attitudes and
beliefs' [Section 8, subdivision 1a(2.b)]."
- Commissioner Cheri Yecke, July 2003.
"Instead of being grouped in clumps (K-3, 6-8, 9-12) [like the
Profiles], good standards are organized grade by grade. They indicate
clearly what students are to learn and when they are to learn it. … They
are rigorous in content, … and jargon-free, … and carefully
sequenced."
- Katherine A. Kersten, Winter 2002-2003.
"[T]he school has again but one way, and that is,
first and last, to teach them to read, write and count. And if the school
fails to do that, and tries beyond that to do something for which a school
is not adapted, it not only fails in its own function, but it fails in all
other attempted functions. Because no school as such can organize
industry, or settle the matter of wages and income, can found homes or
furnish parents, can establish justice or make a civilized world."
- W.E.B. DuBois, address to Georgia State Teachers Convention,
1935
"[In Civics Education], the quest for truth is quickly
subordinated to civic uplift when teachers see their role as fostering
certain civic dispositions in their students .'"
- James B. Murphy (Dartmouth College), "The Tug of War," EducationNext,
Fall 2003,
Organization of This Review
I. Introductory Comments, 2
II. What To Look for in Good Subject Area Standards, 2-4
III. The Second Draft: Improvements and Weaknesses, 4-7
IV. Second Draft Problems: Format, Terms, Strands, "Social
Studies", 8-
A. Confusing Format and Jargon, 8-9
B. The K-3 Standards and the Need for Early Core Knowledge, 10-11
C. Should Local Schools Decide How to Distribute the 3.5 Grade 9-12
Credits? 11-13
D. Is K-3 History Content Not "Developmentally Appropriate"?
13-16
E. K-3 and 4-12: What's "Higher Order" About "Higher
Order Thinking Skills"? 16
V. Specific Historical Errors, Behavior Expectations & Ambiguities
in the Second Draft, 23-33;
VI. Previous Reviews by this Reviewer: First Draft (October 2003);
Profiles of Learning (2000), 34-36
VII. How to Combine History Content Standards & Skills Standards
Without Confusion, 36-39;
VIII. "The Justice and the Klansman: A Plea for World History,"
39-40;
IX. History Scopes & Sequences (U.S., Minnesota, World): First Draft
& Second Draft, 40-41;
X. Sources Consulted, 42-43;
XI. Reviewer's Background, 44-45. XII. January 2, 2004 Invitation Letter,
46
I. Introductory Comments and Outline of This Review
This is my third review of Minnesota "Social Studies"
standards. I reviewed the "Profiles of Learning" (POLs) in 2000
for the Council for Basic Education and Achieve, Inc. In October 2003, I
reviewed the first draft of "Minnesota Draft History and Social
Studies Standards," describing them as "on target and
fundamentally sound, because they are centered on core subject area
content, making them understandable to teachers and non-teachers
alike." If the history (U.S., world, Minnesota) and government/civics
standards are strengthened as recommended, not only will all students
benefit, but the partisanship will also be lessened. Except for the scope
& sequence, I did not closely review the economics or geography
standards.
II. What To Look For in Good Subject Area Standards
(from the review of the first draft)
Good subject area standards describe and delineate a broad outline
of the core subject-area content knowledge that students are required to
master, i.e. know, at designated grade levels. They are objectively
described and delineated in language that is clear and free of partisan
bias.
1. Standards are objective when they are free from overt,
implied or intentionally disguised partisan or ideological bias, slant
or perspective.
Standards that are objective allow perspectives and opinions, both
contemporary and present-day, but do not prescribe
"correct" perspectives, viewpoints or interpretations.
Historical perspectives, e.g. Hamilton’s and Jefferson’s opposing
views on the constitutionality of the proposal to charter a Bank of the
U.S., are part of the historical record, "open" for teachers
and students to examine and debate. There is no "correct"
opinion as to who was "right." Interpretations are only as
valid as the supporting evidence. That is how the study of history
enlightens; when turned to "politically correct" or
"patriotically correct" ends, however, history is abused and
its power to enlighten diminished. Furthermore, standards that prescribe
perspectives, opinions, behaviors or goals unrelated to mastery
of knowledge cannot be fairly tested by a common set of assessments.
2. Content standards and supporting benchmarks must broadly
describe what a student is expected to know, i.e. what
knowledge is subject to being tested.
a. History content standards should be organized as a
chronological sequence of broadly described historical eras and
major events and significant individuals. Chronological organization
must be obvious.
The logic of history is chronology since events are defined
according to when they happened. Cause and effect is a
chronological relationship between two or more events over time
and is the core concept of history. This relationship is at the heart
of all legal codes, business transactions, the scientific method, and
most moral codes and religious outlooks. It's at the core of the
Judeo-Christian tradition. It is the core concept underlying personal
responsibility, because it links actions to consequences. The study of
history is the study of countless acts and actions of individuals,
peoples and nations and the resulting consequences, both intended and
unintended.
b. K-12 standards in all subjects should be organized in their
traditional disciplines.
The traditional subjects and subject-area disciplines developed
their unique logical patterns of organization and self-correction over
long periods of time, in some cases centuries, as the most efficient
ways to organize, present and maintain the integrity of their
respective bodies of knowledge.
There is also an important cognitive reason for this: the memory
organizes information in clusters, each with its own inherent and
practical logic.
c. The present draft limits chronology in both world and U.S.
history to 10 epochs or eras. Within those long time spans, events in
both the benchmarks and the "Examples" are randomly listed.
More importantly, there should be, but there isn't, a clear
chronological sequence of major events.
3. A content standards document (history, geography, government
& civics, economics) should list the sequence of subject area
content SEPARATELY from "essential skills," e.g.
"historical thinking skills," specific to that subject area.
It should provide an example or template explaining how to combine the
two together in a lesson plan or teaching unit (see pp. 36-39,
below).
For that reason, in a history and social studies standards document,
"historical thinking skills" should be listed separately from
the content standards.
To lessen this confusion, a single common prompt statement should be
found at the top of every page, directly under the heading
"Benchmark" and followed by knowledge statements:
// BENCHMARKS \\
"STUDENTS WILL BE ABLE TO DEMONSTRATE THEIR KNOWLEDGE
OF:"
(This is a prompt statement; it only introduces the content to
be learned:)
"1 . THE MAJOR EVENTS LEADING TO THE
OUTBREAK OF THE CIVIL WAR, FROM THE COMPROMISE OF 1850 TO THE VOTE OF
THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE FOLLOWING THE ELECTION OF 1860."
Thus, each historical event or cluster of events that students are
expected to know is listed without the admixture of how
they will demonstrate that knowledge, etc. Examples or models of
the efficient way to combine historical events with skills will be
found in the state curriculum guide or it will leave that decision to
the school district or teacher (see example, pp. 36-39, below).
Similarly, the standards do no mandate how students' knowledge of a
particular event must be demonstrated for assessment purposes.
4. Standards are not a curriculum; therefore, they don't have
to list every detail within each standard that students are expected to
know.
5. Standards presume that teachers have the content knowledge to
teach their assigned subjects.
When teachers have limited or no background in their subject areas,
their dependence on textbooks and/or school system curricula is far
greater. The commissioner should consider appointing a task force to
review the validity of licensure requirements. Most state licensure
requirements are excessive and have no relationship to student
achievement. An excellent study of this problem was conducted by the
Baltimore, Maryland, Abell Foundation. It found that most of the studies
purporting to demonstrate a link between teacher licensure standards and
teacher effectiveness were "flawed, sloppy, aged, and sometimes
academically dishonest… The same limited research is quoted
repeatedly, with frequent mistakes in interpretation; and one cannot
help but conclude that the research was not actually read (or not read
carefully)" (Walsh, 13; www.abell.org/pubsitems/ed_cert_1101.pdf).
6. Standards presume teacher professionalism, i.e. that teachers
will not use their authority to promote their own views instead of an
objective presentation of subject material.
Teacher professionalism is hampered, when teachers are forced to
teach to standards that implicitly or openly require teachers to
encourage criticism of historical institutions or individuals - or
mandate that these historical institutions or individuals must be
idolized.
Teacher professionalism, especially in history, government, and
literature classes requires that teachers distinguish between teaching
the events and explaining the differing ways that historians interpret
the events. I addressed this challenge in a short essay that examined
teachers' ethical responsibilities to their students as the U.S.
responded to the 9/11 attacks and went to war in Iraq (Martel, http://www.edexcellence.net/foundation/publication/publication.cfm?id=316#835).
An important improvement of this and the first draft over the POLs is
the absence of a mandate to teach "diverse or multiple
perspectives," which required the teaching of group stereotypes.
This draft, however, still mandates the promotion of patriotic beliefs
and behaviors in places; they should be removed. As stated above,
perspectives and any number of interpretations are not prohibited from
examination and discussion; it is improper to mandate them.
III. The Second Draft: Improvements and Weaknesses (continuing and
new)
A. Improvements in the second draft include a reduction in the
number of standards and benchmarks, correction or removal of many
historically inaccurate, politicized and/or confusing statements, addition
of an "Examples" column for suggested events or individuals and
removing much of the ideological and behavioral focus from the
"Government and Citizenship" standards.
B. Weaknesses of Problems in the Second Draft
Although behavioral goals and abstract themes no longer define the
standards as they did the POLs, their lingering presence contributed to
the sharp disagreements around the first draft and, thereby, limits this
draft's potential to guide the writing of coherent subject area curricula,
an important component for the improvement of student achievement. The
problems include:
1. An impractical format and confusing jargon;
2. Traditional subjects combined into a single "social
studies" framework;
3. A significant number of historical inaccuracies and behavioral
mandates, which take 11 pages of this review;
4. Excessive attention to geography at the expense of world history;
5. A recommendation that high schools in local districts have
flexibility in the amount of time devoted to each social studies
subject, i.e. not be bound by the present mandatory course
credits/semesters;
6. Contributionism: The imbalanced emphasis on
individuals over events removes individuals from the historical context
that gave meaning and significance to their accomplishments. Harvard
sociologist Orlando Patterson used the term "contributionism"
to describe how the emphasis on individuals historically omitted created
its own distortions. The lists that were drawn up on the 8-page summary
of changes reflect an overemphasis on "contributors" in the
teaching and study of history.
It also acts as a form of censorship, because the whole point
of listing "contributors" is to list their positive
accomplishments, since negative actions are, by definition, not
"contributions." When, however, the focus is on events, and
individuals are brought into the events, their roles can be studied in
historical context, i.e. more objectively.
This problem is given de facto notice in the "References
in Social Studies Standards," (the 8-page list summary of changes
from the first draft), which lists Native Americans, Women in History
and, perhaps the saddest caricature of all, Democrats and Republicans.
The saddest thing is that there is this list, which is simply a list
of names. Almost as sad are the historical errors in this list! Whoever
put it together got it wrong, because they were looking for labels,
literally looking for beans to count - with no attention paid to the
history, the real history that gave life, depth and meaning to them.
Both Thomas Jefferson and James Madison were elected as
Democratic-Republicans, opposed by the dying Federalist Party. The party
of Jefferson and Madison, i.e. the factions that constituted its base of
support, is the precursor of the Democratic Party of Andrew Jackson,
which is the organizational precursor of the modern Democratic Party.
The Republican Party was founded in 1854 out of the break-up of the
Whig Party and the Northern wing of the Democratic Party following the
passage of the Kansas-Nebraska Act of 1854. It traces its beginning to
two political clubs that started in Michigan and Wisconsin. The name
"Republican" was chosen, because of a conscious design to link
the new Republican Party to the Jeffersonian ideals of an "Empire
of Liberty" and an "Agrarian Republic" of land-owning,
yeoman farmers. In its policies and stances on issues, it was a
successor to the Federalist-Whig [and Free Soil] Party policies.
So, where is it proper to place Jefferson and Madison? Here again,
the list betrays a two-dimensional formalism. For reasons of historical
or organizational continuity and positions on a number of issues, both
Jefferson and Madison belong quite clearly in the line of succession
that led to today's Democratic Party. But, it is also clear that the new
Republican Party of the 1850's could justifiably claim to be in the
Jeffersonian tradition.
Given the two lists, it is probably most accurate to place them
somewhere in the middle; better yet, get rid of the lists and focus on
the real history. Where to place Jefferson and Madison is a great
discussion topic - if students are allowed to learn the facts of their
public lives - and even a good topic for a research paper or project.
7. Reduction of required subject-area content knowledge in grades
K-3 on the basis of undocumented theories of child development and the
relationship between factual knowledge and skilled use of that
knowledge;
8. Mandating personal views over factual knowledge;
9. Leaving gaps in U.S. History and World History;
10. Requiring only one semester of World History in grades 9-12;
At a time when the U.S. has taken a more active role in the world
and Americans are debating the nature and scope of future
international involvement, all students should have the opportunity to
truly study world history. I recommend two years in grades 7-12,
including at least one full semester on the history of the west. This
has been, but should not be, an area of contention. If it is taught as
HISTORY "with warts and all," and with the goal of
UNDERSTANDING the historical background of the U.S. and its
disproportionate effect on the rest of the world during the past 500
years, this should not be so controversial.
Katherine Kersten, who writes about politics and education for the
StarTribune, described one of the weaknesses of the POL's: "Under
the [former] Profiles [of Learning], Minnesota students theoretically
can complete high school without studying world history at all"
(Kersten, 44). One semester isn't much of an improvement.
The study of world history & grounding in the history of
Western Civilization are can be seen in "The Justice and the
Klansman: A Plea for World History," my title for Prof. Ed
Smith's anecdote, on pp. 39-40.
By allocating a full two years to the study of world history, it is
then possible to give adequate attention to other major world regions.
The world history standards and benchmarks world history benchmarks
are, indeed, overstuffed with facts, but the solution is to give it
more time, not to remove more history or permit local jurisdictions to
amalgamate it into a formless "social studies."
11. Places Minnesota history and local history with world history
(grades 4 & 6), when they logically dovetail with, i.e. are part
of, U.S. history;
C. Political, Religious and Ideological Characterizations: The Obstacle
to Content Centered Standards and Broad Acceptance.
Many of the public comments posted to the Department of Education's
website used the terms "conservative" or "liberal" to
emphasize their authors' criticisms of parts of the [first] draft of the
history and social studies standards. Occasionally stronger
characterizations were employed as pejoratives. Such characterizations
offer little of value in writing and evaluating standards and educational
policies. They stigmatize and stereotype and create artificial barriers
between people who share a common interest in effective schools and
educational programs based on a well-documented history of success. That
is the legacy of the POLs and serves only to divide and confuse.
When standards and curricula for history courses are centered on a
chronological core of historical events with sufficient allowance for
local school AND INDIVIDUAL TEACHERS' special expertise and interests,
controversy is reduced. When the focus is centered on behavior and
attitudes or on what standards writers believe or hope will interest or
motivate students and teachers, potential for conflict increases.
IV. Second Draft Problems: Format, Terms, Strands, "Social
Studies"
A. Confusing Terms and Format: Forcing Subject-Area Standards for
History into an Artificial Format
1. Confusing Terms or Jargon vs. "everyday English"
"Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a
jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent."
- George Orwell, "Politics and the English Language" (1946)
(http://eserver.org/langs/politics-english-language.txt).
Instructions and guides are reader-friendly when they area clearly
written and employ "everyday English." Jargon creates the
false illusion of esoteric expertise, when none exists, but has the
effect of silencing potential critics, in this case parents and
teachers, who may wonder what happened to straight-forward historical
chronology. When used to justify a questionable policy, it is
documentation by obfuscation. Two examples from the format of the
standards draft are "strand" and "sub-strand."
| Everyday English vs. |
Social Studies Jargon |
| Subject |
"Strand" |
| Historical Era |
"Sub-Strand" |
Neither the format nor the terms are those used by historians to
organize the presentation of historical events. This is immediately
obvious, when one sees that the U.S. History Courses for grades 3, 5, 7
& 9-12 (and similarly for World History and Minnesota History) have
a "strand" or subdivision labeled "U.S. History,"
which is one of five "strands" listed under U.S. History.
2. Why is U.S. History divided into five "strands," one of
which is called "U.S. History"?
The reason has nothing to do with efficient organization of standards
or the way history teachers organize their lesson plans. It comes from
an attempt to force history (U.S., world, state/Minnesota), geography,
government & civics, economics, and essential skills into artificial
divisions of a broader, all-encompassing super-subject called
"social studies."
Is "social studies … a content rich subject area"?
("Perception Versus Reality," item #4; "Final Draft
Academic Standards in Science and History/Social Studies," December
19, 2003;
http://www.education.state.mn.us/content/059705.pdf).
"Social studies" is not a content area; rather, it is
an umbrella term for several traditional subject areas that, for the
sake of administrative convenience at the K-12 level, are
organizationally grouped into a single department, in the same way that
foreign languages are grouped into a foreign language department or the
sciences into a science department.
The content of "social studies" is recognizable as history
content, geography content, government/civics content, etc. Each of
these subjects has a unique logical structure. By attempting to force
history (U.S., World, Minnesota), geography, government &
citizenship and economics into one format with a single set of
"essential skills" compromises their integrity. More
importantly, it unnecessarily complicates the establishment of
reader-friendly and user-friendly subject-area standards, curricula and
lesson planning. This was the process behind the creation of the
Minnesota Profiles of Learning, which reduced traditional subject areas
to "social studies" themes and strands.
Although the current second draft is qualitatively far superior to
the POL's, the attempt to force these subjects into a single
"social studies" mold compromises the learning potential of
each. As explained previously, this is partially obscured by the use of
authoritative-sounding jargon.
3. The Development of National Standards did not include "Social
Studies"
In the "Goals 2000: Educate America Act" of 1992, the U.S.
Congress provided funding for the development of K-12 subject-area
standards for discipline-based subjects in the field of
social studies: history, geography, economics and government/civics.
"Social studies" was not included for the obvious reason that
it is not a discipline.
The National Council for the Social Studies (NCSS), although a
participant in the development of history standards as one of the seven
professional organizations that organized focus groups, initiated a
"social studies" standards project, publishing Expectations
of Excellence: Curriculum Standards for Social Studies (http://www.socialstudies.org/standards/)
in 1994.
The National Council for the Accreditation of Teacher Education (NCATE),
together with NCSS, produced the almost identical Program Standards
for the Initial Preparation of Teachers of the Social Studies (http://www.ncate.org/)
in 1997. For a closer examination of the difficulties posed by these
standards, see "Can 'Social Studies' Prepare History Teachers"
by this reviewer in "AHA Perspectives," the monthly newsletter
of the American Historical Association, http://www.theaha.org/perspectives/issues/1999/9910/9910VIE.CFM.
B. The K-3 Standards and the Need for Early Core Knowledge: Is It Too
Early For Children to Learn That History is Called History and That
Geography is Called Geography?
In the 8-page summary of changes incorporated into the second draft (http://www.education.state.mn.us/content/059705.pdf),
which I will refer to as "Summary Report," it states,
"In grades K-3, students and teachers will find standards and
benchmarks, in all of the strands as students are introduced to social
studies. Starting in fourth grade, the committee organized the standards
and benchmarks with more concentration on individual subject areas …"
1. K-3 History Units Should Be Structured Around Clear Historical
Chronologies
Although the individual subject areas in K - 3 are identified, the
benchmarks need to be more specifically organized around the traditional
subjects. In particular, history topics need to be organized around
chronology, which should have an inherent structural presence in
addition to being explicitly taught. This is especially the case for
disadvantaged children who don't enjoy the advantage of learning this at
home.
2. K-3 History Units Should Have More Historical Content
By the same token, there must be a greater emphasis on subject area
content. This is where disadvantaged children (defined as children who
enter school without the pre-literate or early literate skills that
"advantaged" children have from being read to; having access
to books, trips to the library & museums, etc.) must receive maximum
content-rich instruction in these subject areas so they can build
subject-specific vocabulary and the foundational clusters of content
knowledge they will need for more advanced knowledge in grades 4 and up.
The importance of this cannot be overstated, because this is where
the learning/achievement gap that limits disadvantaged,
disproportionately minority children starts. By the time instruction in
actual subjects starts in grade 3 or 4, the gap continues to widen.
As the schools lay the foundational reading/decoding skills (phonics)
in K and 1, the schools must also start building or expanding subject
area knowledge. (For a recent discussion of this problem, see "The
Early Catastrophe: The 30 Million Word Gap" by Betty Hart and Todd
R. Risley in The American Educator, (Spring 2003), publication of
the American Federation of Teachers, http://www.aft.org/american_educator/spring2003/catastrophe.html.
The researchers discovered that, by age 3, a child of professional
parents had heard 30 million more words than a child on welfare. The
former child had a vocabulary and heard a number of different words per
hour that were roughly twice the number of the child on welfare.
An article by E.D. Hirsch in the same issue reviews the research that
explains the importance of vocabulary words and domain (subject matter)
knowledge, "Reading Comprehension Requires Knowledge - of Words and
the World: Scientific Insights into the Fourth Grade Slump and Stagnant
Reading Comprehension" by E.D. Hirsch, Jr. http://www.aft.org/american_educator/spring2003/AE_SPRNG.pdf).
C. Should Local Schools Be Allowed to Decide How Much U.S. History,
Geography, Government & Citizenship, World History and Economics to
Require of Students in Fulfillment of their 3.5 Social Studies Graduation
Requirement in grades 9-12?
1. The Present Requirements and the Proposals:
The present requirement calls for:
| 1.0 U.S. History |
1.0 Geography |
0.5 World History (!) |
| 0.5 Government and Citizenship |
0.5 Economics |
|
As stated in Item #2 of the 8-page summary and on page 30 of
the Second Draft:
"The Commissioner's proposed language would change this
requirement to 'three and one half credits in social studies,
encompassing at least U.S. History, Geography, Government and
Citizenship, World History and Economics.'"
That would be a serious mistake. At the high school level, this
would be tantamount to a return to the POLs' amalgamated or
"integrated" (see next) "social studies" classes. The
purpose of such a change is spelled out very clearly on page 30 of the
second draft. The negative consequences of this should not be missed or
minimized:
"Note: Should the above recommendation be accepted, schools
would have more flexibility and, for example, could meet the
graduation requirements with integrated courses (such as
geography, economics, government and civics standards being integrated
into a two-year study of U.S. History)."
In other words, in the name of "interdisciplinary study,"
some courses will be folded into others. The objection to clearly
defined subjects is not given. The likely consequences are watered-down
courses, most likely U.S. & world history.
2. "Interdisciplinary Study" or "Interdisciplinary
Learning"
The term for this melting pot or salad bowl of subjects is
"interdisciplinary study." It always sounds good on paper and
is usually supported by evocative, seemingly intellectually rigorous
slogans: "thinking outside the box," "breaking the
mold," "shifting paradigms," etc.
They are, however, usually failures, because
a. Each of these traditional subject areas has its own structure as
a discipline. This is especially true of history, government/civics
(from political science) and economics. It is also true of geography.
Inevitably, one format takes over and the rest have to be forced into
it - exactly as this standards document demonstrates. The compromises
damage the integrity of some or all of the component courses/subjects.
b. Government/civics, economics and geography as subjects or
disciplines are not the same as a history unit focused on political
history or economic history or territorial (geographic) history.
c. It requires teachers to simultaneously juggle and integrate
several distinct frameworks.
d. The question must be posed: why do some school districts feel
the need to alter traditional courses? Each of these
subjects/disciplines is a distinct discipline at the college level.
The Profiles of Learning promoted "interdisciplinary
learning." I addressed that in my 2000 Achieve/CBE review by
quoting from Howard Gardner.
First, I prefaced the issue:
"Since the blurring and shifting of disciplinary boundaries in
the POL resembles aspects of interdisciplinary learning, that teaching
strategy should be addressed. Although teachers should make
interdisciplinary connections whenever possible, it is not justified
as a standards driving philosophy. Subject areas and their parent
disciplines have evolved, in some cases over centuries, and continue
to be the most efficient way to learn their core knowledge and
concepts. Attempts to impose interdisciplinary or pan-disciplinary
standards on K-12 students ignore the hard fact that for most people,
interdisciplinary learning only becomes possible after having
established a base of knowledge in both disciplines.
"This point is addressed in considerable depth in an article
by Harvard University educational psychologists Howard Gardner and
Veronica Boix-Mansilla:
"'Current debates around the organization of pre-collegiate
curriculum have directed considerable criticism at the dominant role
assumed by subject matter or disciplines. Criticisms have ranged
from a call for interdisciplinary or theme-based curricula to an
emphasis on ‘ways of knowing,’ or ‘learning styles’ as
organizing units that replace disciplinary knowledge.
"'In this article, while acknowledging the merit of some of
the critique, we propose a positive view of disciplinary knowledge.
We claim that, over the years, knowledgeable human beings working in
specific domains have developed concepts, methods, and perspectives
as means of better understanding the physical, biological, and
social worlds around us. We find students’ access to these
disciplinary tools to be an indispensable ingredient of quality
education. Shorn of disciplines we become intellectual barbarians.'"
(Gardner & Boix-Mansilla, 198).
The authors then comment on classroom experiences that are advertised
as interdisciplinary or multi-disciplinary:
"'[I] t is crucial to note that interdisciplinary work can be
carried out legitimately only after the individual has become
at least somewhat conversant in the relevant disciplines. Much of what
is termed interdisciplinary or multi-disciplinary work in the early
grades is actually pre-disciplinary work – drawing chiefly on common
sense.'" (Gardner & Boix-Mansilla, 208)
I would strongly urge the shortening of the Grade 9-12 Geography
requirement to 0.5 credits and the lengthening of the World History
requirement to at least 1.0 credit. With this country's long-standing
role as a major force in the world arena, it is unacceptable for
students to leave high school with only one semester of world history in
grades 9-12. Geography is not an adequate replacement for World History,
because Geography is not centered on chronology, i.e. on the concept of
cause and effect, actions and consequences.
D. "The Standards are not Developmentally Appropriate."
("Perception Versus Reality," item #3, the 8-page summary of
changes on the website: http://www.education.state.mn.us/content/059705.pdf).
The following comments are made in #3:
"Many people were very concerned about the rigor of the
standards, especially in the early grades. This criticism was voiced at
every public hearing with many people citing the following social
studies benchmarks:
- "First graders knowing 'how migration and colonization
influenced American history.'
- "Third graders 'comparing and contrasting characteristics of
ancient cultures such as Persia, China, India with Greece.'
- "Fourth graders studying the 'ideas of John Locke.'"
Comment: Why That Objection is Invalid
1. The "developmentally appropriate" objection is really a
continuation of the K-3 objections listed above.
2. "Developmentally appropriate" is an evocative, very
scientific sounding phrase that is invoked around the country to block
phonics/decoding/phonemic awareness reading instruction,
content-centered instruction in the early grades, and the early building
of foundational knowledge in arithmetic.
It is without scientific or research support. If legislators or
members of the public are unsure about this, they should require those
who use such expressions to provide them with scientifically conducted
studies (double blind studies with controlled variables, not anecdotes)
to support those claims.
3. If the examples given above are analyzed, the
"developmentally appropriate" objection quickly dissolves. The
First Grade benchmark listed above reads: "Students will know how
migration and colonization affected American history."
The standard is poorly written. As written, it presumes that a child
knows several individual or combined concepts:
a. The concepts of "migration" and
"colonization"
b. The concept of "affected" (to affect);
c. The concept of "American history."
d. The combined concept of "affected American history."
If we break them down, as any good early childhood teacher does, it
turns out to be within the learning potential of a First Grader.
a. "Affected" (to affect) is the only concept that is
fairly concrete in meaning and can be fairly quickly learned.
b. "Migration" or "colonization," is an
ambiguous abstraction; they are broad generalizations of many specific
historical events.
There's no specificity of when, where, or who. In that sense,
they are not "developmentally appropriate," but is there
any adult who could answer that question without "when, where
and who" being specified?
c. "American history"
What is the "what" of "American history" that
was "affected" that a First Grader can be expected to know?
In the case of the Pilgrims, that "what" is almost all of
American history, for what has not been, to some degree
"affected" by the Pilgrims' "migration"?
Can a First Grade child (lets call this hypothetical Minnesotan
Michael) learn about the migration of the Pilgrims in 1620? Can he
learn that
i. Their arrival in 1620 marked one of the beginnings of what we
call "American history"?
ii. The Pilgrims settled near the native Indians, were aided by a
local Indian named Squanto who spoke English and that soon more
English Pilgrims and, then, Puritans came over, because they wanted
to practice their religion as they chose to, etc.?
The answer to each question is an unequivocal, "YES!"
The reason everyone reading this can answer, "YES!" is
because, as implied above, the foundation of required knowledge, i.e.
historical knowledge or "facts," was built up, concrete
"fact" by concrete "fact." Each sequenced
component, "migration," "colonization,"
"colony," that period in "American history," etc.
must first be learned before a complex question can be answered.
But even then, the complex, end-of-Pilgrim unit question must be
written in concrete terms, not in broad, ambiguous and abstract
language. For example:
Rewritten Standard for Grade 1:
"The student will know:"
"The reasons why the Pilgrims left England and established the
Plymouth colony in 1620."
It must be broken down into its year or date span and its physical
location in "American history." Once those concepts have
been learned, or, indeed, as they are being learned, the child
is developing connections, seeing patterns of similarity and
dissimilarity, all of which will lead to that information being stored
in some memory location.
Odds are that little Michael already knows one of the first things
that the Pilgrims brought that "affected American history":
freedom of religion. He might already understand that the reason he
and his friends go to different churches/temples is related to the
Pilgrims' "migration" in 1620. Once he knows that, he can
learn the difference between the Pilgrims (Separatists) and Puritans.
d. Thus, the concrete building blocks of that knowledge are very,
very "developmentally appropriate."
What was not "developmentally appropriate" was a question
that was
i. Vague;
ii. Required him to know a few concrete "facts" that he
was not allowed to learn, because learning "a list of
facts" is strongly discouraged.
e. The alleged and undocumented opinion that all instruction must
center on the teaching of "Critical Thinking Skills" or
"Higher Order Thinking Skills" is the excuse for denying
students the early opportunity to learn the historical and
geographical facts they need in order to think critically about their
world.
In most states, early childhood teachers simply have not had the
opportunity to discover the enthusiasm that well-designed history
units can bring to their classes. As a result, children are trapped in
"expanding environments" units.
The second draft does move in the direction of historical content,
but it is too little.
I would suggest contacting Elaine Wrisley Reed, Director of the
National Council for History Education (nche@nche.net;
440-835-1776). She is a former elementary history teacher. NCHE has
developed suggested K-4 scopes and sequences. There is also the work
of Kieran Egan, who has done research in early childhood history
education.
E. What's "Higher Order" About "Higher Order Thinking
Skills"? (Objection #4 in the 8-page web-site summary: The standards
"do not promote higher order or critical thinking skills."
(The entire section is listed, so that its full significance can be
examined)
1. "4. The standards are simply lists of facts for
memorization and do not promote higher order or critical thinking
skills.
"Because of the overwhelming number of benchmarks in the first
draft, many teachers understandably viewed it as a list of facts to
memorize. With a high volume of standards in each subject, teachers
would not have time to develop critical thinking skills with their
students. By substantially reducing the number of standards and
benchmarks, the committee made the final draft more manageable, allowing
teachers the time in the classroom to work on higher level thinking
skills with the content provided.
"The committee also made significant changes to the expectations
in the standards and benchmarks, adding higher order thinking skills
such as analyze, explain, examine, evaluate, and compare and contrast.
"The most significant addition to the final draft standards in
social studies was a new strand on Essential Skills that has been
added throughout the document. Since social studies is a content rich
subject area, the Essential Skills standards will be useful for teachers
and students as they apply what they have learned using inquiry and
historical research skills." (http://www.education.state.mn.us/content/059705.pdf).
2. Comment On: "Simply Lists of Facts for Memorization"
That sentence contains two separate but linked statements, each of
which contains an unstated and implied premise that is rhetorically
presented as if based on evidence:
- "Simply lists of facts for memorization";
- "Lists of facts … do not promote higher order or
critical thinking skills."
(Each of these assertions will be separately addressed)
a. Note that "facts" are negatively termed "lists of
facts" and disparaged by the dismissive word, "simply";
b. "Memorization," which appears nowhere in the standards
first draft, is thrown in because, it is implied, everyone is expected
to know how terrible "memorization" of "lists of
facts" is;
c. It is so terrible that, who would think to argue the validity of
that statement? Since I am familiar with the world of education and
the debates that occur within it, I will call upon another
hypothetical Minnesotan, a local expert on the issue of
"memorization" of "lists of facts." He happens to
be hockey fan and, since intense love of hockey starts early in life
in Minnesota and, despite rumors to the contrary, is not a genetic
trait, but learned knowledge, I will pose some real questions to this
hypothetical 7 year old, whom I shall call Nick:
i. Who are the starters for the Wild and who has the most goals?
ii. What position does Andy Brunette play and what's his number?
Odds are that he and his friends have memorized many "lists
of facts" about teams, players, etc. in the NHL. That's an age
when children, depending on their interests among other factors,
start accumulating knowledge, including "lists of facts"
that they have, in fact, memorized.
d. The phrase "lists of facts" for
"memorization" implies that the names of people removed from
the first standards draft were random. In fact, the names on the K-3
standards document were names of people who had something in common or
who would be studied as part of a larger unit. Memory researchers have
long known that the memory stores information in clusters or chunks
that have a logical relationship to other bits and bytes of knowledge.
Most important of all, the more clusters of knowledge one has and
the more that is stored in each cluster; the easier it is to acquire
more knowledge. Again, the failure of schools to work at building
subject area knowledge in the early grades contributes to the growing
achievement gap.
3. Objection #4 in 8-page report, 2nd Part:
"4. The standards …do not promote higher order or critical
thinking skills."
a. Comment on the statements regarding "higher order thinking
skills":
i. It is pedagogically without foundation to oppose "higher
order thinking skills" to "facts," i.e. subject-area
content, and to memorization.
There seems to be little understanding that historical
"facts" are almost always taught in patterns, the most
important example of which is chronology. That means that they are
not random "lists of facts." When historical facts are
presented in an inherently logical pattern that ties them together,
e.g. students reading a biographical excerpt from the life of George
Washington or Frederick Douglass, they are learning an array of
skills, such as the challenge of making difficult decisions with
many unforeseen consequences:
- The evolution of Douglass' views of his status as a slave and
reaching the decision to escape;
- The evolution of Washington's view's of Virginia's colonial
status or his response to the "Newburgh revolt."
ii. Whether a student reads this information in a book or hears
this information in a lecture, his or her mind is being challenged
to examine, evaluate, compare and contrast the options and
possibilities GW and FD faced, all of which are forms of analytical
thinking. If the teacher then leads a discussion, such as the
following one, look at all of the skills that are learned and mental
connections that are being formed.
The teacher asks students to:
- List the options each faced;
- List the advantages and disadvantages of pursuing each
option;
- Suggest why he made that decision - and support it with
evidence;
- List the consequences of the decision in two columns:
positive & negative;
- Take notes during the classroom discussion;
- Write an essay with a thesis statement, "What were the
consequences of GW's decision to support independence?"
Note how all of these analytical skills are addressed/developed.
They are all skills that must be taught and they can be effectively
taught using well-written accounts of historical events and
biographies, but they are not hurdles. They do require what this
document is hesitant to allow: students to have access to the
historical eras, patterns and events, exposure to maps and globes,
and familiarity with the structure of their state and national
governments.
iii. These are the common practices any well-prepared teacher.
These apparently routine activities are, in fact, leading children
and students through an entire array of skills that enable them to
be the critical consumers of information that we value. This little
example points to the value of history: each historical event is the
result of many decisions, conflicts, compromises, trials, challenges
and even the horrible results of wars - out of which, both good and
bad consequences flow.
Instruction, even in the upper grades, begins with concrete
information, not abstractions. That's why well-written, and
age-appropriate biographies and historical fiction are good
instructional materials.
To disparage that process as "memorization" of a
"list of facts" is to betray a profound misunderstanding
of learning, cognition and the power of history, geography and all
subjects to engage and enlighten students.
b. What a Removed Benchmark Reveals
The following benchmark was removed from Grade 1 (first draft) to
Grade 2 (second draft) Geography:
"Students will be able to locate and name the continents and
oceans on a map of the world and on a globe."
Yet, in Grade 2 Geography, two other benchmarks require children to
- Recognize the outline shapes of countries and locate cultures
and civilizations studied in history"; and
- "Locate and describe places about which they read."
Comment on the Removed Benchmark
i. If children had been able to learn about the continents and
oceans in First Grade, they would be better prepared to
"recognize the outline shapes of countries …" in Second
Grade;
ii. Just what are the indispensable and complex "higher
order thinking skills" that must be taught with these basic
geography facts that requires the postponement of that knowledge?
iii. As in the previous example, the concepts of
"continents" and "oceans" are linked facts,
facts that exist in a pattern or cognitively, a chunk or cluster [or
byte] of knowledge, a building block for future knowledge.
iv. In fact, many children will enter Grade 1 already knowing
about continents and oceans - and dinosaurs and whales, etc. But
those who don't, the disadvantaged, are shackled to a policy of low
expectations. Although all children will suffer from intellectual
growth unnecessarily limited, a disproportionate percentage will be
minority students.
4. What Does the Counterposition of "Critical Thinking
Skills" against "Lists of Facts for Memorization" mean?
a. The misuse of the term "critical thinking skills" is
effectively described by E.D. Hirsch, founder of the CORE Knowledge
Schools:
"Critical-thinking skills": A phrase that
implies an ability to analyze ideas and solve problems while taking
a sufficiently independent, "critical" stance toward
authority to think things out for one's self. It is an admirable
educational goal for citizens of a democracy, and one that has been
advocated in the United States since Jefferson. The ability to think
critically is a goal that is likely to be accepted by all American
educational theorists. But it is a goal that can easily be
oversimplified and sloganized. In the progressive tradition that
currently dominates our schools, "critical thinking" has
come to imply a counterpoise to the teaching of "mere
facts," in which, according to the dominant caricature,
sheep-like students passively absorb facts from textbooks or
lecture-style classrooms. Critical thinking, by contrast, is
associated with active, discovery learning and with the autonomous,
independent cast of mind that is desirable for the citizens of a
democracy. Conceived in this progressive tradition, critical
thinking belongs to the formalistic tool conception of education,
which assumes that a critical habit of thought, coupled with an
ability to read for the main idea and an ability to look things up,
is the chief component of critical-thinking skills. This tool
conception, however, is an incorrect model of real world critical
thinking. Independent-mindedness is always predicated on relevant
knowledge: one cannot think critically unless one has a lot of
relevant knowledge about the issue at hand. Critical thinking is not
merely giving one's opinion. To oppose "critical thinking"
and "mere facts" is a profound empirical mistake. Common
sense and cognitive psychology alike support the Jeffersonian view
that critical thinking always depends upon factual knowledge.
E. D. Hirsch, Jr., "The Schools We Need and Why We Don't Have
Them" (New York: Doubleday, 1996) & http://www.illinoisloop.org/thinking.html
b. Memory: On the subject of memory, see
"Inflexible Knowledge: the First Step to Expertise" by
Daniel Willingham (Daniel T. Willingham is associate professor of
cognitive psychology and neuroscience at the University of Virginia
and author of Cognition: The Thinking Animal. His research focuses
on the role of consciousness in learning)
http://www.aft.org/american_educator/winter2002/CogSci.html
5. Each of the following verbs was added into the second draft to
prompt "higher order thinking skills": "analyze,
explain, examine, evaluate, and compare and contrast" (from
8-page letter, objection # 4). Subject area benchmarks were reduced
and/or moved to higher grades in order to accommodate them. Do these
verbs automatically prompt "critical thinking skills"?
In order to determine whether they actually prompt "higher order
thinking skills," they require closer examination:
a. "Examine" - how is that different from or more
"higher order" than "read", "read
carefully," "look at", "observe"; is
something more implied?
b. "Compare and contrast" - this analytical pair
has been a staple of history instruction for decades. It is frequently
one of the four choice essays in the Advanced Placement U.S. History
examination.
It appears quite a few times in the standards draft, but often in a
problematic form (see below).
c. "Analyze" - It has been added to many
benchmarks in the second draft, but usually in problematic form.
Often, whatever it is that needs to be "analyzed" is either
unspecified or too vague to be a guide for teachers or developers of
assessments. Here is an example, one of many:
Grade 6, World History, p. 19:
Substrand: Emergence of a Global Age, 1450-1650 A.D.
Standard: "The student will demonstrate knowledge of
non-European civilizations of the world after 1500 A.D.":
Benchmark: "Students will describe the location and development
of various empires of the world, and analyze their
contributions."
Problem: The empires are not specified by time period, name or
location; which ones? All?
They should be named. There should also be a set of categories
(political, economic, social, religious, etc.) for analyzing
Simply sticking the word "analyze" into a
benchmark statement does not transform a benchmark into prompt for a
higher level of cognitive activity. In fact, it creates an impossible
activity, because it doesn't describe the full range of knowledge that
a child must master in order to successfully achieve the skill.
An example of the poor use of the term "analyze"
is in Grade 4 World History, second draft (p. 9):
Standard: "The student will demonstrate knowledge of
interactions among Eurasian civilizations."
Benchmark: "Students will examine and analyze
interactions and regional trade patterns among Europe, East Asia and
the Middle East."
a. Comment
i. What "interactions" are to be analyzed?
ii. What time period? What geographical region?
iii. The Benchmarks column offers no specificity
iv. The Examples column lists "Marco Polo, silk road, Mongols,
Gengis (sic) Khan and Prince Henry of Portugal";
v. Does "among" mean within each region, between each
region or both?
vi. This is how "analyze" is employed in many of the
benchmarks, i.e. without any attempt to specify what or when.
6. The very next Benchmark on page 9, under the same
"Sub-strand" ("Era"), but another standard:
Standard: "Students will demonstrate knowledge of the
civilizations of the Americas."
Benchmark: "Students will compare and contrast major features of
the Aztec and Incan civilizations."
The Examples column lists: "Mathematics, astronomy,
transportation, art, architecture, agriculture"
Comment:
The Examples column is only supposed to "compliment (sic) the
benchmarks [which]… are not considered foundational," i.e.
required.
While those are the obvious features to compare, they create some
difficulties:
- Mathematics and astronomy - the Aztec and Inca were not noted for
mathematics or astronomy; rather; it was the Maya, but their decline
occurred around 750 CE/AD;
- Why not include the concept of empire building? Both were
empires; "Inca" refers to the ruler who was considered a
deity; the Aztec, a successor empire that displaced the Toltec and
Tula in the early 1400's offers a pre-Columbian example of conquest
imperial expansion.
Fourth Graders know a lot about empires from video games and movies.
The process of conquest by which these empires were built offers an
interesting topic for comparison and contrast with the Spanish conquests
of the early 1500s. And, these pre-Columbian empires also had
"warts."
7. Will the Application of "Inquiry Skills" Benefit
Students?
The addition of "[e]ssential Skills standards will be useful for
teachers and students as they apply what they have learned using inquiry
and historical research skills." (8-page summary, Change #4)
Inquiry or discovery learning is based on a widespread educational
theory, according to which children will learn if they are actively
engaged in the process of discovery, much like a historian doing
research or a scientist conducting experiments. In reality, that's a
misconception since neither of these activities takes place before the
historian or scientist has acquired a great deal of expertise.
Elementary science teacher and professor of education Kathleen Roth
observed 5th grade science classes using the inquiry method to teach
science process skills. The particular unit was on photosynthesis. The
article appeared in the Winter 1989 issue of the "American
Educator." The inquiry units she observed took a great deal of
time, far longer than direct instruction, thus taking away time from
other science units. Little direct content information was given the
children, since they were to emulate the scientific process through
which they would "discover" the content and gain conceptual
understanding of the scientific principles.
The results of these carefully planned and scripted units were rather
dismal. Students became bored, despite the hands-on focus and many of
the students never learned the key concepts that were the goals of the
inquiry unit.
From her observations, she concluded,
"I identified students whose naive theories went unchallenged
and unchanged despite weeks of process-focused instruction. These
students did not view the process of science as helping them better
understand their world...."
"Practicing process skills in isolation of conceptual
development does not help students understand how science processes
are useful in understanding the world. Instruction that involves
students in using their own theories in ways that are personally
meaningful and consistent with scientific explanations provides a
powerful alternative to process-focused instruction. To make such
changes, students need to do difficult cognitive work that includes
the use of science processes (predicting, hypothesizing, observing,
inferring). Students do not, however, practice these processes in
isolation and the goal is not for them to be better observers or
predictors. Instead, these processes are used in the service of
developing better explanations of natural phenomena." (Roth 1989,
46).
8. How Should Historical Content Be Combined With "Essential
Skills" or "Critical Thinking Skills"
Confusion over this issue results in standards that are a confusing
mix of globally broad, centuries-long generalizations ("Students
will describe the location and development of various empires of the
world, and analyze their contributions." 1450-1650; Grade 6, p. 19)
next to others that are highly specific ("Students will describe
the issues that Minnesotans faced during World War I and how they
responded to them," 1917-1918 in Grade 6, p. 17).
Standards and Benchmarks and supporting Examples must be written as
"knowledge statements."
9. The unevenness of expectations of students' capacity to
learn in the Draft is apparent. On the one hand, the standards
consider it too difficult for a First Grader to learn the names of the
oceans and continents; yet, by Grade 3, they are expected to
"locate on a map the major world countries, and states and major
cities of the United States" and "major river systems and
mountain ranges on continents studied" (page 8). And, by Grade 4,
they are expected to "analyze interactions" across all of
Eurasia over a 500 time span (page 9) without having learned anything
about the societies in which or between which those interactions
occurred!
10. CONCLUSION: The Real Role of "Higher Order Thinking
Skills" in The Standards Draft
I am not contesting the idea that skills can be plotted on a
hierarchy of complexity and depth of analysis, though that is often
oversimplified.
I am concluding that the "higher order thinking" skill
prompt verbs have not created what its advocates claim, a document that
will form a foundation for subject-area curricula that will produce
graduates able to employ more sophisticated "critical thinking
skills." It does achieve its goal of demeaning history and the role
of memory.
In the early grades, where it is most critical, the Draft denies
disadvantaged children the subject area content needed to expand
existing domains of knowledge and lay the foundations for newer ones
(assuming that reading instruction in K and 1 is guided by the research
of the NICHD National Reading Panel.
V. Examination of Standards and Benchmarks
The standards and benchmarks have a lot of problems.
To make the review of the errors easier to spot, I will use the
following abbreviations, which will be at the head of each page:
HE - Historical Error: In some way, the historical information
contained or implied is inaccurate.
PD - Personal Doctrine: Ideological, Partisan or Religious Belief
Gen - Generalization Too Broad or Vague: An overly broad
generalization does not allow for a specific assessment to be made.
BE - Behavioral Expectation
REVIEW OF INDIVIDUAL STANDARDS, BENCHMARKS AND EXAMPLES
Unless otherwise specified, all references are to the "Minnesota
Academic Standards in Social Studies; Second Draft: December 19,
2003"
Category of Problem:
HE - Historical Error:
BE - Behavioral Expectation
PD - Personal Doctrine:
Gen - Generalization Too Broad or Vague:
Suggested changes will be in BOLD
Grade Level and Subject: KINDERGARTEN & GR 1;
INTRO TO SOC ST
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 1-4 |
BE |
"Character Traits of a good
citizen" |
Subject area standards should only
address academic expectations; attempting to define
"character traits" is inappropriate, because it is not
the province of the school. Schools have codes of behavior and
decorum that all teachers and staff should teach, model and
enforce. |
| 1-5 |
PD |
"Privileges of being a human
being." |
DELETE: This is belief
statement of Personal Doctrine. The U.S. Constitution
guarantees rights to all citizens [and, with little
exception, to all other residents]. It does not grant
"privileges." |
| 2-2 |
Gen |
"Give examples of their
civilization and highlights of their cultures" |
Too vague: The civilizations and the
"highlights" to be learned must be specified. The
term "culture" must always be defined, since it has many
usages. "Civilizations" typically consisted of many
"cultures." |
| 2-4 |
PD
BE |
"Define what it means to be a
citizen in terms of loyalty, membership and self-government" |
DELETE: How is loyalty
defined? The standard implies that there is a "right"
and a "wrong" answer. Does the Minnesota State
Constitution define loyalty? The U.S. Constitution doesn't. |
| 2-5 |
HE |
"…Identify the Declaration of
Independence and the Constitution as America's founding documents
that outline rights and duties." |
The Declaration is only symbolically
a founding document, since it proclaimed independence. It
has no legal status and establishes no rights or duties. |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 1 & 2; Intro to
Social Studies
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 3-1 |
BE |
"…identify and describe how
Americans show respect for national symbols, songs and
events" |
DELETE: The fact is
that many Americans don't do what the benchmark says they
do; therefore, it is asking a child to lie. That is one problem
with behavior statements.
In a sense, what unites Americans is the idea that we can all
disagree about the symbols, songs and events we show respect for.
REPLACE WITH: "…identify significant national symbols,
songs and historical events and explain how they
came to be significant."
That is now a history statement and it is neutral. This
distinction should be understood. It allows the same items to be
taught, but as objective knowledge. It does not put the teacher in
a position of having to promote a point of view. |
Grade 2:
4-4 |
GEN |
"… explain how citizens and
statesmen … have made difference in other people's lives." |
Too vague. Each of these individuals
played significant roles in U.S. history; students should
learn what those roles were.
More importantly: This list is exactly the "list of
facts" that were criticized. It appears that
"lists of facts" are acceptable to those who objected,
if they ar heroic and adulatory. It is more important for
students to learn the history - and how these individuals'
accomplishments fit into the historical context. |
| 4-5 |
HE |
"Decl of Ind … sets forth
guiding principles for the government of our nation and declares
that individuals have rights …" |
Will curriculum documents make clear
to all teachers that the "guiding principles of the
Decl of Ind are only symbolic guiding principles? If not,
this should be deleted.
Add to item #2 "the division of powers" |
| 6-2 |
HE |
"Indian Nations" |
When describing historical groups,
they should be referred to as tribes or societies.
"Nation" is a recent term not in use 200 years ago. |
Grade 3:
7-1 |
BE |
"character traits" |
DELETE |
| 7-1 |
HE
BE |
"statesman as a civic leader …
true to the principles and practices of the Decl of Ind." |
Delete: That is a
personal opinion. What are the "practices of the Decl of Ind
and Constitution"? |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 3; Intro to Social
Studies
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 7-1 |
BE
HE |
"character traits of GW & AL …
in order to understand why each has been so widely respected over
time." |
Delete: There is so much
history that can be taught about GW & AL, the challenges
each faced, etc. That is how children learn the lessons of the past
and learn how to evaluate important historical figures like these
two. It is historically inaccurate, because their historical
significance is based on their actual performance in the face of the
challenges they faced, not on "character traits.".
The entire Government and Citizenship standards for grades K-3 need
to be replaced. These items should be rewritten by someone familiar
with the history of the Declaration of Independence and the
Constitution. Piety is a personal matter and a behavior, not to be
forced on children. It violates the legislature's prohibition
against tests that measure " students’ values, attitudes and
beliefs."
Any child penalized for not meeting that requirement or refusing to
would have legal grounds for a lawsuit. |
| 7-3 |
|
|
ADD to Songs: "We Shall
Overcome" and "Lift Ev'ry Voice and Sing" (sometimes
called the "Negro National Anthem") by James Weldon
Johnson. Both are songs of uplift and determination from different
eras of African-Americans' struggle for civil equality. I have
taught them to classes of immigrant students who studied their
history, discussed parallels to their own experiences and sang them
with enthusiasm. |
| 8-6 |
HE
Gen |
"major African cultures including
Kush and Ghana"
"explain the importance of trade and learning within the
African kingdoms and analyze their impact." |
Ancient Ghana was an empire, then a
state; Kush was a kingdom or a civilization, according to
historians. It had its own form of writing as early as the 5th
Century BC, but not Ghana. But what is known of "learning"
in either?
What form of "impact" is meant? |
GRADE 5
11-3 |
Confusing |
"Students will know why the U.S.
developed the Constitution." |
It is more important for students to
know the debates and compromises that led to the final
document. |
| 12-2 |
HE |
"debate over slavery, including
human rights" |
"human rights" is a late 20th
Century term; There should be a reference to the Second Great
Awakening and the impact it had on reform movements, including
abolitionism. |
| 12-3 |
HE |
"roles of significant figures of the
Civil War Era … including … HBStowe, H.Tubman" |
They were not significant figures in
that era; Stowe was before the war; Tubman mainly before the
war; her work as a spy, etc. was remarkable, but not significant. |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 5; U.S. History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 12-3 |
Inaccurate |
"… analyze the effects of the war
from the perspectives of union & confed soldiers and civilians,
including free blacks, slaves and women." |
I used the term "inaccurate"
to draw attention to the problem with this type of question:
1. The "perspectives" of people from different walks of
life are valid, but offer a very limited picture of the larger
events. This becomes a problem when it takes the place of an
overview that gives meaning and significance to events. |
Grade 5
13-1 |
HE |
"students will understand … the
founders' sense of duty and honor - and how this sense of personal
sacrifice was shared by all the patriots." |
Whoever wrote this could never have
served in the military or read any military history. Soldiers
fight for many reasons, only some of them are "sense of duty
and honor … and personal sacrifice.". As written, this is
inaccurate and it is irresponsible to compel students to lie. |
| 13-1 |
HE |
"Students will understand key
principles in the Decl … with emphasis on human equality and
natural rights, and national sovereignty." |
The Declaration of Ind was primarily a
document aimed at unifying colonists against GB, convincing
potential allies (France, Spain, Holland) that this was a complete
break with GB, and seeking to divide the opposition in GB. It was
first and foremost a propaganda document that fulfilled a specific
need - to justify the cause and gain support.
The principle of "equality" is equally important,
especially because its words, which many memorized (!!) in the 19th
Century, became an ideal that stood in contradiction to inequality
and could be invoked by Frederick Douglass and Elizabeth Cady
Stanton to dramatize the injustice of slavery & women's
inequality. Even Ho Chi Minh invoked them in Viet Nam's declaration
of independence from France in 1946! |
| 13-2 |
HE
Incorrect |
Standard: "Const forms a national
government guided by the Declaration's principles." |
It was guided only in small part by
the Decl. Does the writer know why Patrick Henry said that he
thought he "smelled a rat?" |
| 13-3 |
HE |
Standard: "…the Civil War
re-formed a national government guided by the Declaration's
principles." |
The government was not
"re-formed". The result of the war was the abolition
of slavery. But that was soon followed by Jim Crow segregation and
legal denial of equality. |
| 14-5 |
Unclear |
"2. price of a good is determined by
the interrelationship between production and consumption." |
This is called "supply and
demand"; why not use those terms? |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 6; Minnesota History
& World History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 16-1 |
Jargon |
"Minnesota's
political, cultural, and physical landscapes." |
Employ "everyday
English" |
| 16-2 |
HE |
"… different
perspectives on the causes and effects of the Dakota War of
1862." |
It is important that
the documented history of the events be the core of this
unit. If there are divergent
"perspectives" on what happened, i.e. the established
events, that should be clearly distinguished
from more subjective "perspectives" on why the events
occurred, who was to blame, etc. |
| 17-2 |
Add |
|
The following events
should be considered for inclusion:
in #2: - the Farm Holiday Association
- the 1934 Minneapolis Coal Truckers' Strike, which was a factor
in the founding of the CIO.
in #3: - the internment of WW II Conscientious Objectors in
Sandstone Prison |
| 18-1 |
BE |
#3 "share their
understanding of what it means to be a Minnesotan" |
What will be the
rubrics for evaluating this? |
| 19-7 |
HE |
"effects of
imperialism on colonial cultures of the 18th , 19th
, 20th Centuries" |
As generally employed
"imperialism" refers to 19th & early 20th
C. colonialism.
"Societies" is preferable to "cultures," since
most colonial societies had many
different "cultures." |
| 19 |
HE |
THIS APPLIES TO ALL
EXAMPLES AND MANY BENCHMARKS THROUGHOUT THE
DOCUMENT: |
All examples should
be listed in chronological order |
| THE
WORLD HISTORY ERAS (SUB-STRANDS) ARE TOO LONG, A CONSEQUENCE OF
ALLOWING TOO LITTLE TIME IN THE SCOPE & SEQUENCE FOR WORLD
HISTORY |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 7; US History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 22-1 |
ADD |
|
Plessy v. Ferguson, 1896 |
| 22-2,3 |
HE |
"World Wars" |
This standard only goes to the
1930s; Wars shd be War. |
| 22-3 |
VAGUE |
"Forces shaping the modern
US" |
This is too vague; this period is
usually and more accurately termed, "US Expansion
Abroad" or "Path of Empire" and "America on
the World Stage" by Bailey & Kennedy |
| 22-2 |
HE |
"colonization of the
Philippines" |
More accurate:
"annexation"; yes, it was a colony; but not truly
"colonized"
No mention of the Minnesota 13th Volunteers, who served
in the war that ensued, 1899-1901. |
| 22-2 |
Vague |
"contributions of the early civil
rights movement…" |
This highlights the limitations of
"contributions" as a way of understanding historical
events: To describe the work and achievements of BTW & WEB
DuBois as "contributions" trivializes what they faced
and what they were able to accomplish. It reduces them to a names
of "contributors" on a random list of facts. What
students should learn is how each of them proposed different
solutions to the barrier of segregation and, after Plessy v.
Ferguson (1896), the lack of response from the Supreme Court.
Justice Harlan's dissent should be read, the only former slave
owner on the bench.
ADD Marcus Garvey should be added. He offered a
third alternative, "racial pride" to Northern urban
dwellers, one of the sources of Black nationalism, Nation of Islam,
Malcolm X, etc.
When it is clear that the purpose of history instruction is TO
INFORM AND HELP STUDENTS UNDERSTAND THE SOURCES OF THE
PRESENT, and that the teaching of history is distorted when it is
used to preach some vision of patriotism, on the one hand, or a
soapbox to promote dissent, no teacher should have any difficulty
teaching about Garvey or any other controversial figure or event
in American or world history. |
| 22-3 |
Vague |
"US neutrality and delayed entry
and involvement in WWI" |
It is preferable to describe the
outbreak of WWI, the U.S. response, the diplomacy, etc.
"delayed entry" implies inevitability, which is fine for
students to consider, but is never a known factor. |
|
HE |
"Lusitania" - |
As listed, it is implied that the
sinking of the Lusitania was a cause of the US entry into
WWI. That is incorrect. More important is Germany's breaking of
the Sussex Pledge, which isn't listed. |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 7; US History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 23-1 |
HE |
"Battle for
Midway"; "Tuskegee Airmen" |
small point: usually
referred to as the "Battle off Midway"; "Tuskegee
Airmen" fit into both home front (fight against
discrimination; the fight to be able
to fight - Eisenhower gave the go ahead for them to serve);
and also their notable accomplishments on the
battlefront. |
|
ADD |
|
Double V campaign and A.
Philip Randolph and the March on Washington Movement |
| 25-3 |
Vague
HE |
"students will
articulate a clear thesis statement that explains the historical
relevance of their research topic." |
A thesis statement is
a position statement, equivalent to a hypothesis, arguing
for a particular interpretation of historical events.
Example: "The Tet Offensive in 1968 was a turning point in
the Viet Nam War that led the U.S. to
reduce and ultimately withdraw its military forces." Like a
hypothesis, its accuracy depends upon the adequacy
of supporting evidence..
"document research in the form of a
bibliography"
It should read: "annotated bibliography" or
"annotated source list" |
| 26-1 |
HE
Vague |
"13th,
14th , 15th Amendments altered the powers of
state and federal governments" |
In reference to the
Reconstruction Period, the 14th & 15th
Amendments were important; the 14th's role in the 20th
century in limiting state power is probably
what was meant. It should be
rewritten for clarity. |
Grade 8, Geography
29-2 |
BE |
"people's
perception of regions" & "regions important for
unifying society" |
this is unclear, what
is the performance expectation, ie. the objective evidence
of learning that can be assessed? |
| 32-2 |
HE |
"judicial review in
analyzing the Constitution" |
judicial review
refers to interpreting the U.S. Const., not
"analyzing" it. |
| 32-2 |
HE |
"key debates in the
Const Convention, comparing and contrasting arguments of Federalists
and Antifederalists" |
Their arguments
developed after the Convention, not during it. |
| 32-2 |
HE |
"first political
parties in America … including Jefferson, Hamilton, John Adams
and Andrew Jackson" |
Jackson is not part
of the "first party system" nor is he a direct
contemporary of the others. He is
responsible for the development of the "2nd party
system" |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 9-12; US History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 33-2 |
HE |
"the National Bank" |
correct name: "Bank of the
U.S." |
| 33-3 |
HE |
"Greenback party" |
the Greenback Labor Party arose in
the 1870's; it is out of place here in the pre-Civil War
period. It doesn't need to be a benchmark! |
|
HE
Confusing |
"students will analyze multiple
factors leading to the growing sectional crisis, including the
Missouri Compromise and the Fugitive Slave Act." |
The Missouri Comp was passed in
1820; it is out of place here; although the "standard"
refers to the period 1780s-mid 1800s, all of the other events and
individuals are from the 1840s & 1850s. The Missouri
Comp was not a factor "leading to … sectional crisis";
rather, it helped avert it for over 30 years. |
| 33 all |
Move to Benchmark Status
- many of the terms and names in the Examples column are seminal
events in US history, not of an optional nature.
Louisiana Purchase, Manifest Destiny, M-A War, Missouri Comp,
Indian Removal Act of 1830, Tariff issues, Nullification Crisis,
Second Great Awakening (One can hardly understand the rise of
the abolitionist movement and other pre-Civil War reform
movements without understanding the religious influence of
the Second Great Awakening!)
IMPORTANT POINT: IT IS OBVIOUS THAT SOME WRITERS HAVE ATTEMPTED
TO INSERT THEIR PERSONAL RELIGIOUS VIEWS INTO THE DRAFT.
YET, IT IS TELLING THAT NEITHER THE FIRST GREAT AWAKENING
NOR THE SECOND HAVE RECEIVED MUCH ATTENTION IN THE DRAFT, DESPITE
THEIR IMPORTANT ROLES. THEIR INCLUSION IN THE STUDY OF HISTORY
SHOWS HOW TO PROPERLY INCLUDE THE IMPACT OF RELIGION AND RELIGIOUS
MOVEMENTS IN THE STUDY OF HISTORY.
Additional Items to be moved to benchmark status:
Mormons (not Mormonism), F Douglass, Stanton, Mott, Seneca
Falls, German & Irish Immig, Comp of 1850, formation of the
Republican Party, Kansas-Nebraska Act (far more than Bleeding
Kansas), John Brown's Raid. |
| 33-4 |
HE |
"Students will understand events
and people important to the eventual abol of slavery, incl the
abol movt, F Douglass, HBS's public of U T's Cab and the Emancip
Procl" |
These events and individuals did not
end slavery; they led to the Civil War, of which the EmProc was
part, which ended slavery. This is one of the most important
periods in U.S. history and extremely thoroughly documented. There
is no reason for ambiguous statements about this period to appear
in a standards document. |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 9-12; US History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 35-3 |
HE |
again: the Lusitania is mentioned, but
not the Sussex Pledge, the resumption of Ger submarine warfare |
In the discussion of World War II, it
is important to mention the key roles of the Soviet and Great
Britain in defeating Germany. |
| 36-3 |
ADD |
|
(as recommended for Grade 7) the double
V campaign; the March on Washington Mvt & A Philip Randolph,
formation of CORE, opening of jobs in factories for women and
African-Americans. |
| 37-2 |
ADD |
|
Truman's desegregation of the military
formation of the National Security Council |
| 38-2 |
Vague |
"reaffirmation of Indian
sovereignty" |
This requires clarification: It is a
reference to the Indian Self-Determination Act of 1974. The
draft makes several references to "sovereignty" and "nations";
it must make clear that this is limited sovereignty. |
| 39-2 |
HE |
Standard: "African
civilizations" - then, under Examples: "ocean going
trade" |
Delete: There is no
substantiated evidence of sea voyages from Africa in pre-modern
times. These claims have been examined by a number of researchers
in African history and found wanting. ( See Ortiz de Montellano et
al., 1997, 2 references). |
| 41-4 |
HE |
Under examples: "matrilineal
descent" in reference to African kingdoms |
This must be made more specific to
the actual society so described. Some African societies trace
descent through the mother, but some are patrilineal. |
| 46-3 |
HE |
"students will analyze how Middle
Eastern protectorate states achieved independence from
England and France in the 20th century" |
They were not protectorates; they
were mandates, technically under League of Nations
authority. |
| 47-1-3 |
Vague |
This is an important skills section.
Most of the skills listed are important. The most important
improvement to be made is to reorganize the skills into logical
categories that describe the actual sequence of doing research,
from topic selection to final draft. |
|
| 47-3 |
HE |
"students will learn how
historians present their work in multiple formats…" |
This is misleading: historians
present their work initially in written form, supported by
citations of annotated sources. They or sometimes others may also
present their work in other formats. |
| 47-3 |
Change |
"2. students will select a
presentation format to …communicate their ideas." |
CHANGE TO: "With the advice and
approval of the teacher, the student will select a format for
presenting historical (or other specific subject) research"
Not just "communicate their ideas." |
Grade Level and Subject: Grade 9-12; US History
PAGE
ROW |
CATEGORY
OF PROBLEM |
PROBLEMATIC
STANDARD, BENCHMARK OR EXAMPLE |
CORRECTION/COMMENT
UNDERNEATH IN ITALICS |
| 48-1 |
ADD |
|
Another influence on the
Constitution was the colonial experience with elected
colonial legislatures - and the frequent conflicts between them
and the royal governors. |
| 48-1 |
HE, ? |
"pursuit of
happiness (property)" =
pursuit of happiness included the right to own property (which
included slaves!), but the idea expressed a much wider sense of
opportunity and the chance to better oneself. |
|
| 49-1 |
HE |
"2. Students will
analyze features of the U.S. Constitution ….its status as
highest law … local self-government, and the sovereignty of
American Indian Nations."
and on p. 50 (Govt & Cit): "Students will explain the
sovereignty of American Indian Nations as stated by the United
States Constitution." |
- the Const is
usually termed the "basic" or "fundamental"
law of the land;
- "local self-government" is confusing - it should
specify states govt; if this is a reference to municipal
"self-government" in Minnesota, it should be clarified..
- "the Const says nothing about "the sovereignty of
American Indian Nations"
Article I, Section 8, which lists the
powers of Congress, reads:
"To regulate commerce with foreign nations, and among the
several states, and with the Indian tribes;"
It is very clear that "and with the Indian
tribes" is not an appositive or example of "foreign
nations," but an entirely separate category. |
| 49-1 |
Vague |
"5. Students will
explain the Founders' view of constitutional government as articulated
in the Federalist papers." |
The reference should
be to Hamilton, Madison & Jay, not "the Founders,"
which implies that they alone were the "founders". |
|
HE |
"the NW Ordinance
provided for the creation of new states." |
The NW Ordinance was
adopted under the Articles of Confederation and established
an important precedent - which should be noted- but the
provision for the admission of new states is in Article IV,
Section 3 of the Constitution.
ADD: The concept of precedent is important to
add (establishment of the Cabinet, the self-imposed two-term
limit, foreign policy based on neutrality toward European
conflicts, etc.) |
| 49-1 |
HE |
Examples:
"Federalism, including the doctrine of designated powers…" |
The term is
"delegated" powers. |
| 50-2 |
HE & PD |
Examples: "strict
constructionism vs. judicial activism" |
The traditional opposite
term to "strict constructionism" is "loose
constructionism"
It is a neutral and descriptive term; whereas, "judicial
activism" is a politicized one. |
VI. My Previous Reviews of the First Draft and the Profiles of
Learning (2000)
A. From Solicited Review of the First Draft, September 4, 2003:
1. I wrote the following in my review of the first draft:
"The draft history standards posted on September 4, 2003 are
on target and fundamentally sound, because they are centered on
core subject area content, making them understandable to teachers
and non-teachers alike. Behavioral goals and abstract themes are no
longer the core of the standards as they were in the POL's."
This observation reflects the comparison to the POL's. In the present
review of the second draft, I am noting that the types of structural
confusion that defined the POL's were present in the first draft and
remain in the second draft.
2. The following is an excerpt from my review of the Government and
Citizenship standards in the first draft (emphasis in original):
"The Government and Citizenship Draft Standards, evaluated on
pp. 18-23, are embarrassing, poorly written, misinformed and
factionally motivated. They should be discarded and replaced. The
Department of Education should find writers who understand the
historical role and meaning of the Declaration of Independence, the
U.S. Constitution and the how it has evolved over time. This section
of the draft social studies standards was more and more shocking as I
read on. It is an ideological and behavioral document, just like the
POLs."
As a result of the revisions in the second draft, the ideological and
behavioral wording referred to above was significantly lessened, but is
still present, especially in the Government & Citizenship standards,
primarily around two topics: The Declaration of Independence and the
effort to instill patriotism.
In my review of the first draft, I quoted from an article in the Fall
2003 issue of "EducationNext" by Dartmouth professor of
government James B. Murphy. His cautionary advice against attempting to
create "citizenship standards" should be carefully considered
by those who feel that their vision of civic responsibility is
inadequately represented.
"Civics Education: The "Tug of War" by James B. Murphy
"'A fierce debate over civic education in America’s public
schools has erupted in response to the terrorist attacks of September
11, 2001. Broadly speaking, liberal approaches to civic education have
emphasized the need to resist jingoism and to explore why America
induces such hatred in certain parts of the world. By contrast,
conservative responses to 9/11 have emphasized our national virtues
and the need to defend them in times of danger. Conservatives tend to
caricature liberal civics lessons as the toleration of the
intolerable, while liberals often criticize conservative civics
lessons as a knee-jerk brand of patriotism. … My view, briefly
stated, is that the attempt to inculcate civic values in our schools
is at best ineffective and often undermines the intrinsic moral
purpose of schooling' (Murphy, 70).
"According to two studies he cites, 'civics courses have some
small effect on students’ knowledge but virtually none on attitudes'
(Murphy, 72).
"He concludes, '[E]ven if we could all agree about the proper
civic virtues, the very attempt to inculcate them undermines the
integrity of the academic curriculum. The quest for truth is quickly
subordinated to civic uplift when teachers see their role as fostering
certain civic dispositions in their students'"
(Murphy, 72) (http://www.educationnext.org/20034/70.html).
B. Excerpt from My Review of the Profiles of Learning (POLs), April
2000.
In April 2000, I was one of approximately 20 educators contracted by
the Council for Basic Education and Achieve, Inc. to review the social
studies "Learning Areas" of the Minnesota POLs. I was shocked at
the way the traditional subject areas of history (U.S. and world),
geography, government/civics and economics had been dissolved into two
unrecognizable "Learning Areas" termed "Inquiry" and
"Peoples and Culture."
In my "Summary of Findings," I wrote:
"The Minnesota Profiles of Learning are fatally flawed for the
following reasons:
- They are structurally confusing, since the ten Learning
Areas don't correspond to traditional and current divisions of the
subject areas.
- they are uneven and incomplete, in that important
historical thinking and analytical skills are omitted, while others
receive excessive attention.
- (given the state curriculum ban) they don’t offer model
subject area content scopes and sequences …;
- they are unscientific. The POL are guided by a
philosophy of human cognitive growth and development known as
"constructivism." Despite the claims of
"constructivist" theorists, controlled studies do not
demonstrate its greater effectiveness; rather, research finds it
inferior to "direct instruction."
- Constructivism and the POLs are anti-scientific in that
they promote an epistemology or means of understanding the world that
gives greater weight to subjective or impressionistic views than to
empirical evidence. They assign greater authority to subjective
classifications of knowledge than to substantive or tangible content
by:
- assigning greater value to students' opinions, impressions,
social skills, and social views than to subject matter content and
relevant analytical skills;
- demeaning the accumulated knowledge of history, social studies,
mathematics and the physical sciences by placing greater importance
on "inquiry" or "discovery" skills;
- fostering the illusion that inherently subjective process
standards, abstracted from substantive bodies of knowledge, can be
assessed by any fair and quantifiable set of objective standards;
- elevating arbitrary and subjective classifications of humanity,
e.g. "race" and gender, to the level of predictive traits,
e.g. "Diverse Perspectives."
- the POLs (and constructivism) are ideological, in that
they place greater value on social, behavioral and psychological
attitudes than on acquiring knowledge."
VII. How to Combine Content Standards With Skills Standards
How to Combine Content Knowledge Benchmarks With Skills Benchmarks
(How the format of the "National Standards for History"
combines historical content knowledge, termed "historical
understandings," with "historical thinking skills").
A. Caveat: the National History Standards
There was a great deal of public controversy over the National History
Standards, when they were released in 1995. The axis of disagreement
centered on lists of names of historical figures (who was in and who was
out and what that signified) and criticism vs. praise of U.S. policies,
institutions and individuals.
It is cited here, because it offers a reader-friendly format model
format. As a member of the ASCD focus group (one of seven groups that
met periodically from 1992 to 1994 to review drafts and recommend
changes), this reviewer helped design the format or template for
combining from two separate lists historical content and historical
thinking skills (i.e. "essential skills") and combining them
in a lesson plan format.
B. What is the Problem With the Format of the Second Draft of
the Minnesota History & Social Studies Standards That Requires Fixing?
Most of the benchmarks are written with prompt verbs that describe very
specific ways that the historical [or geographical, government/citizenship
or economic] knowledge is to be demonstrated and, therefore, evaluated by
the teacher. For example:
From Grade 7, U.S. History; page 22, Row 2:
#1. "Students will know and understand the reasons for
the Spanish American War and its resulting impact."
Also from Grade 7, U.S. History; page 22; Row 3:
#2. "Students will explain Wilson's 14 Points and the
failure of post-war internationalism, and analyze the rise of
United States' isolationism."
The first example states that the student should know and understand
the historical information. Since it is a benchmark, it is implied that
what is known and understood is subject to being evaluated, i.e. tested.
The second example states two very specific - and different - ways that
the student is to demonstrate his or her knowledge of the historical
information. The student is called upon to explain Wilson's 14
Points, but is expected to analyze (although "analyze" is
never defined in the standards document, it is understood to mean a deeper
understanding and explanation than one expects from to explain) the
rise of U.S. isolationism.
If the wording in the standards document is intended to mean what these
words commonly mean, then the fact that some historical information must
be explained or analyzed, must mean that historical
information that students are called upon to know and understand do
not need to be explained or analyzed. In fact, it means that
a teacher cannot call upon a student to explain, list, describe,
provide examples, demonstrate, classify, compare & contrast, analyze,
etc. any historical information that is listed after know and
understand, examine, recognize that, learn how, etc.
It also means that a teacher cannot ask a student to describe
historical information, if the benchmark states that the student must compare
and contrast information. In other words, it means that whenever a
teacher anywhere in Minnesota, whether in Roseville or Forest Lake, in
Onamia or Grand Marais, in Little Canada or Lake Wobegon, teaches the unit
on Wilson's 14 Points, all of the students are required to explain
them, not list them or analyze them. It is doubtful that
this is the intention.
C. The Solution
The solution is to list all of the required historical content
information after one common "knowledge prompt." The point
of the standards document is to list, describe and delimit the bodies of
historical, geographical, etc. knowledge that students must know. How that
knowledge will be presented (lecture, library research, internet research,
museum visit, video, guest speaker, etc.) is left to the school district,
school or individual teacher. Likewise, the evaluation or assessment of a
student's attainment of that knowledge will be described on another
document, perhaps at the local school district level. By the same token,
the development of future statewide assessments should not be restricted
to assessing only that knowledge which clearly calls upon the student to
do more than know and understand.
A good "knowledge-prompt" at the head of each benchmark
column is:
"The student will be able to demonstrate knowledge of:"
Each benchmark will be written as a completion of the prompt clause,
e.g.
"The political, economic and social events between 1763 and
1776 that led to the decision the declare independence."
Curriculum documents will list the different ways that students will be
expected to demonstrate that knowledge.
The same is true of skills or "historical thinking skills."
The skills that students are expected to master should be listed in a
separate part of the standards document. The local district curriculum
director or local school or individual teacher decides how to combine each
mandated skill with a given history unit.
D. The Solution: How To Merge Required Historical Content Knowledge
With Historical Thinking Skills ("Essential Skills") in a
Curriculum Document or Lesson Plan.
1. Within Era 3 ("Revolution and the New Nation,
1754-1820; the National Standards for U.S. History list 10 eras), there
are three chronologically sequenced subdivisions, called
"Standards". For example:
"Students should understand (this same descriptor precedes each
standard; that keeps the focus on the content that is to be learned
without tying it to a skill or an activity [that comes later])
Standard 1: "The
causes of the American Revolution, the ideas and interests involved in
forging the revolutionary movement, and the reasons for the American
victory."
Notice that the "standard":
a. describes a time period, "causes of the American
Revolution";
b. describes historical content: "ideas,"
"interests" that led to a specific set of events called
"forging the revolutionary movement" and events
("reasons") the led to another event, "American
victory."
c. allows for flexibility on the part of the teacher and the student:
there can be different emphases on which "causes" and which
"reasons" were most important.
d. is written in "knowledge" language and does not list an
activity, such as "analyze," "list,"
"compare," etc.
2. HOW EACH "STANDARD" IS DIVIDED
INTO SMALLER, CHRONOLOGICAL SEQUENCES CALLED "COMPONENT
STANDARDS" (In the Minnesota draft, this is the equivalent to
benchmarks, i.e. descriptions of knowledge that must be mastered)
Within "Standard 1" (above), there are three component
standards, labeled 1A, 1B, 1C. For example, 1A:
"Standard
1A: The student
understands the causes of the American Revolution."
Notice again, that the component standard describes a defined
time period, defined historical content (a sequence of events), is
flexible, and is written in "knowledge language," not in
"activity" or "performance" language.
3. HOW EACH "COMPONENT STANDARD" IS
FOLLOWED BY EXAMPLES THAT COMBINE:
a. Historical Content Knowledge;
b. Historical Thinking Skills;
c. Activity Language, Beginning with the Phrase, "Therefore the
student is able to."
For example:
Figure 1: "Therefore,
the student is able to"
|
5-12 |
Reconstruct the chronology of the critical events leading to the
outbreak of armed conflict between the American colonies and
England. [Establish temporal order] |
Figure 1 shows how the following elements of
good historical standards are combined into an activity:
1. historical content: " critical
events leading to the outbreak of armed conflict between the American
colonies and England"
2. historical thinking skills: "…chronology
of the critical events leading to…"
3. language denoting a lesson plan activity: "
Reconstruct the chronology…"
4. a single common phrase describing the expectation: "Therefore, the
student is able to…"
The standards document does not tie a knowledge standard into a specific
teaching method or pedagogy, nor does it describe how the student is to
demonstrate that he or she "is able to …"
That is left to the school district curriculum supervisor or individual
school principal or department chair or the individual teacher.
VIII. "The Justice and the Klansman" - A Plea for
the Study of World History.
This is what students miss when they are denied the full opportunity to
learn from their global world heritage.
THE LOWERING OF HIGHER EDUCATION (excerpt)
By Edward C. Smith (June 28, 2003)
(Director of American Studies, The American University, Washington, D.C.
Prof. Smith is largely responsible for the first statue of Abraham Lincoln
in Virginia! It is located at Tredegar Historical Park on the James River.
It is where Lincoln landed on his brief visit to Richmond following its
capitulation on April 4, 1865. The statue depicts AL seated next to his
son. It is one of the designs being considered by the U.S. Mint for a new
design of the penny in 2009.
(http://www.washingtontimes.com/commentary/20030628-094917-9160r.htm)
"On a recent visit to Arlington National Cemetery, I took a group
of my students to the gravesite of Supreme Court Justice, Hugo Black.
Before coming to Washington, Black had been a member of the Alabama Ku
Klux Klan. While serving in the United States Senate, Black evolved into a
passionate lover of the Western "classics," which introduced him
to the universality of the human condition and thereby effectively
liberated him from the psychic enslavement of racist narrow-mindedness.
Thus, he grew so much in learning and stature that he was rightfully proud
to administer the oath of office to Thurgood Marshall twice: when Marshall
became U.S. solicitor general in 1965 and when he became the first
African-American associate justice on the U.S. Supreme Court in 1967.
Marshall and Black are buried very near each other close to the President
Kennedy gravesite. Indeed, this year marks the 40th anniversary of the
president's assassination.
"When, in 1954, Justice Black joined the 9-0 Brown vs. Board of
Education ruling — knowing full well it would ignite a firestorm of
social revolution — the vast majority of his fellow Southerners were so
disgusted with him that they labeled Black a "traitor to his
heritage." The following year in 1955, the Montgomery Bus boycott
began and two years later President Eisenhower sent troops to Little Rock,
Ark., to integrate Central High School. The revolution had indeed begun.
"In its essence, reading is a profound act of humility. It is an
admission an author possibly knows more about a subject than we do and has
offered us the opportunity to quietly "listen" — at our own
pace — to his thoughts and draw from his well of wisdom.
"Also, reading exposes us to points of view that are
well-presented and can be completely at variance with our own opinions.
This confrontation with ideological opposition (which is rarely seen on
politically correct campuses) can contribute immensely to the growing
experience. For example, Justice Black was transformed by his readings of
the Bible, Homer, Plato, Shakespeare, Montaigne, Tolstoy, and many others,
all of whom were writers he could never have met in person but did meet on
paper. And their presence in his life remained fruitful and lasting. They
became his chosen extended family of "ancestors" by adoption and
they were always nearby residing on his shelves."
IX. Scopes and Sequences: First Draft; Second Draft
A The First Draft (September 4, 2003) lists three U.S. and world
history sequences, and one Minnesota sequence:
| Grade |
US History |
Minn. History |
World History |
| K-2 |
people & events
mostly pre-CivWar |
people & events
(mostly pre-CW |
holidays, skills
early civilizations |
| 3: |
Era: Time Period
1: preCol-1607
2: 1607-1763 |
|
Era: Time Period
1: prehist-1000 BC
2: 1000 BC-500 AD |
| 4 |
3: 1763-1791 |
|
3; 500-1000 AD |
| 5 |
3: 1801-1861
4. 1850-1870s |
|
4: 1000-1500 AD |
| 6 |
|
Native Ams Explorers |
2: 1000 BC-500 AD
3: 500-1000 AD
4: 1000-1500 AD |
| 7 |
3: 1775-1860
4: 1850-1870s |
settlers pre-CW
Civil War |
|
| 8 |
5: 1880-1900
6: 1896-1929
7: 1929-1945
8: 1945-1980
9: 1989-present |
1880-1900
1900-1968
1968-2000
2000-present |
|
| 9-12 |
Eras 1-9 |
|
Eras 1-8 |
B. The Second Draft (December 19, 2003): U.S. and world history
sequences, and one Minnesota sequence:
| Grade |
US History |
Minn. History |
World History |
Skills |
| K-2 |
people & events
mostly pre-Civ War |
|
people & events
early civilizations |
chronology
chronology |
| 3 |
Era: Time Period
1: preCol-1607 |
|
Era: Time Period
people: civilizations |
TimeLine-1650 |
| 4 |
|
|
1: PreHist-1000 BC
2: 1000 BC-500 AD
3: 500-1000 AD
4: 1000-1500 AD |
chronology of persons, events, concepts of each era
studied |
| 5 |
2: 1607-1780s
3: 1763-1791
4: 1801-1861
5: 1850-1870s |
|
|
chronology of persons, events, concepts; use
historical resources |
| 6 |
|
1: PreContact-1650
2: 1600-1810
3: 1810-1860
4: 1860-1864
5: 1864-1914
6: 1914-1945
7: 1945-present |
5: 1450-1650
6: 1640-1920 |
evaluate historical resources |
| 7 |
6: 1877-1916
7: 1900-1930s
8: 1930s-1945
9: 1945-1980
10: 1980-present |
|
|
research skills; thesis; primary vs. secondary
sources; mult causation/perspectives; citation; plagiarism |
| 8 |
(only geography in grade 8) |
Grade 9-12 US History
1: prehist-1607
2: 1607-1780s
3: 1781-mid 1880's
4: 1850s-1870s
5: 1877-1916
6: 1900-1930s
7: 1930s-1945
8: 1945-1968
9: 1968-present |
Grade 9-12 World History I
1: PreHist-1000 BC
2: 1000 BC-500 AD (West Civ)
3: 1500 BC-700 AD (World Civ)
4: 400-1000 AD (Western Civ & World Civ)
5: 1000-1500 AD (Reg'n'l Interact)
(Reg'n'l Interact-West Civ) |
Grade 9-12 World History II
6. 1450-1600 (West Civ)
(Global Age)
7: 1640-1920 (Global)
(West Civ)
8: 1914-1945 (West Civ)
9: 1945-present (West Civ)
(Global) |
X. SOURCES CONSULTED
DuBois, W.E.B. "Curriculum Revision" (addess
to the Georgia State Teacher's Convention, April 12, 1935) in DuBois
Papers, Park Johnson Archives, Fisk University; quoted in King, Kenneth
James, Pan-Africanism and Education in the Southern States and East
Africa. (New York: Oxford University Press, 1971), p. 257.
Gardner, Howard & Boix-Mansilla, Veronica, "Teaching for
Understanding in the Disciplines - and Beyond" in Teachers College
Record 96.2, Winter 1994, 199-218.
Hart, Betty & Risley, Todd R. "The Early Catastrophe: The 30
Million Word Gap" in The American Educator, (Spring
2003), http://www.aft.org/american_educator/spring2003/catastrophe.html.
Hirsch, E.D. "Reading Comprehension Requires Knowledge - of Words
and the World: Scientific Insights into the Fourth Grade Slump and
Stagnant Reading Comprehension" in The American Educator,
(Spring 2003), http://www.aft.org/american_educator/spring2003/AE_SPRNG.pdf.
Hirsch, E.D. "'You Can Always Look It Up'... or Can You?" in American
Educator, (24.1), Spring 2000, 4 -9, http://www.aft.org/american_educator/spring2000/LookItUpSpring2000.pdf
Hirsch explains the importance of readily accessible content knowledge -
knowledge that doesn't require spending time "looking it up."
"The Illinois Loop: Your Guide to Understanding Education in
Illinois"; http://www.illinoisloop.org/socstud.html.
This site examines many about learning and common practices in education,
including the role of "social studies" versus traditional
content subjects.
Kersten, Katherine A., "Minnesota's Profiles of Learning," in
American Experiment Quarterly, Winter 2002-2003, 37-51, http://www.amexp.org/aeqpdf/AEQv5/aeqv5n4/AEQv5n4Kersten.pdf
Martel, Erich, "Can 'Social Studies' Standards Prepare History
Teachers?" in AHA Perspectives, 37.7, October 1999, 33-37; www.theaha.org/perspectives/issues/1999/9910/9910VIE.CFM
Martel, Erich, "Teaching Current Events," in Terrorists,
Despots and Democracy: What Our Children Need to Know.
Washington, D.C.: Thomas Fordham Foundation, August 2003, http://www.edexcellence.net/foundation/publication/publication.cfm?id=316#835.
Murphy, James B. "Tug of War'" in EducationNext (3, 4)
Fall 2003, 70-76, http://www.educationnext.org/20034/70.html.
National Center for History in the Schools (NCHS), National
Standards for History Los Angeles, CA: University of California, Los
Angeles, 1996. http://www.sscnet.ucla.edu/nchs/standards
The National Standards for History document.
National Council for the Social Studies (NCSS), National Standards
for Social Studies Teachers. Washington, D.C.: NCSS, 1997; http://www.socialstudies.org/standards/
Ortiz de Montellano, Bernard, Haslip-Viera, Gabriel, Barbour, Warren,
"They Were NOT Here before Columbus: Afrocentric Hyperdiffusionism in
the 1990s" in Ethnohistory (44:2) Spring 1997, 199-234.
Ortiz de Montellano, Haslip-Viera, Gabriel, Barbour, Warren,
"Robbing Native American Cultures: Van Sertima's Afrocentricity and
the Olmecs" in Current Anthropology. (38:3), June 1997,
418-441.
Roth, Kathleen J. "Science Education: It's Not Good Enough To 'Do'
or 'Relate'" in American Educator. (13,4) Winter 1989, pp.
16-22, 46-48. Roth describes a 5th grade science class that
employed "inquiry" or "discovery learning."
Walsh, Kate, Teacher Certification Reconsidered: Stumbling for
Quality, Baltimore: Abell Foundation, 2001; www.abell.org/pubsitems/ed_cert_1101.pdf.
Willingham, Daniel B. "What Do Scientists Know About How We Learn?
A brief summary of the most important principles of learning and
memory." in Core Knowledge 12, 1 & 2 (Winter/Spring 1999),
6-7, www.people.virginia.edu/~dbw8m.
Yecke, Cheri, "Remarks to the Minnesota Academics Standards
Committee," email from Jeanne Hall, Assistant to the Commissioner;
Roseville, MN, August 6, 2003; Jeanne.hall@education.state.mn.us
XI. Reviewer's Background
I have been a high school social studies teacher in the Washington,
D.C. Public Schools since 1969. At present, I teach two sections of
Advanced Placement U.S. History, two sections of World History and one
section of African Studies. I write a monthly column on local educational
issues on an educational watchdog site, www.dcpswatch.com.
I presently serve on a DC Public Schools Task Force to develop
procedures to ensure the integrity of student academic records. It was
established in response to my discovery that the academic records of many
students contained improperly altered grades and course credits and that
large numbers of students who had not completed graduation requirements
were certified for graduation (http://www.washingtonpost.com/ac2/wp-dyn/A18814-2002Jun8?language=printer).
SHORT LIST OF STANDARDS AND CURRICULUM RELATED ACTIVITIES
curriculum co-writer, 1994-97
DCPS; Dept of Education grant |
Development of draft history standards
for DCPS |
The College Board/ETS
1993-1996; 2002-2003 |
AP U.S. History essay reader/consultant |
National and Local History & Social Studies Standards
| focus group member, 1992-1994 |
ASCD Focus Group on National History
Standards to review the three drafts. I helped develop the grid
template to link the differentiated historical content standards
with skills standards. |
| committee member, 1998-2000(-?)
(project never completed) |
CCSSO INTASC Social Studies Committee:
Developing certification standards for new social studies teachers |
| state standards reviewer April 2000 |
reviewed the Minnesota "Profiles
of Learning" for the Council for Basic Education &
Achieve; see www.achieve.org
(executive summary). |
| state standards reviewer March 2001 |
reviewed the proposed Texas Education
Agency's proposed TAAS II assessment base for social studies
courses in grades 8, 10, 11 for Achieve, Inc. |
Articles
A. The Portland, Oregon "African-American Baseline Essays"
"Teacher’s Corner: Ancient Africa and the Portland
Curriculum Resource" in Anthro-Notes (Smithsonian
Institution), Spring 1991.
"Should Curricula Focus on Students’ Ethnic or Racial
Group?" "No. Keep the Common Core of Values" in American
Teacher, March 1991.
"Afrocentrist Historical Claims: An Examination of the Portland,
Oregon, African-American Baseline Essays" in The World History
Bulletin, Fall-Winter 1991-1992, pp. 13-16.
"How Valid Are the Portland Baseline Essays?" in Educational
Leadership, December-January 1991-1992, pp. 20-23.
"The Egyptian Illusion: Fatal Flaws in One Popular Afrocentric
Text" in "Outlook" in The Washington Post, February
20, 1994.
"What’s Wrong With the Portland Baseline Essays?" in
Miller, John (ed.) Alternatives to Afrocentrism, Washington,
D.C.: Center for Equal Opportunity, 1996, pp. 37-42.
B. The Vietnam War and 9/11
"Where Were You in 1968?" and "Background To The Tonkin
Gulf Resolution" in The Magazine of History, Fall 1992.
"An Attack Upon the World" in September 11: What Our
Children Need To Know, Washington, D.C.: Thomas B. Fordham Foundation,
September 2002; www.edexcellence.net/Sept11/September11.pdf
"Teaching Controversial Current Events" in Terrorists,
Despots and Democracy: What Our Children Need To Know,
Washington, D.C.: Thomas B. Fordham Foundation, August 2003; http://www.edexcellence.net/foundation/publication/publication.cfm?id=316#835).
C. History Standards
"How One Focus Group Evaluated National History Standards" in
OAH Council of Chairs Newsletter (Organization of American
Historians), August 1995.
January 2, 2004
Dear Social Studies Reviewer,
Thank you once again for reviewing the first working draft of the
Minnesota K-12 social studies standards and for the thoughtful suggestions
you provided. Let me take a minute to update you on our progress.
During this past fall, the commissioner hosted a series of town hall
meetings across the state to get input from members of the public on the
draft standards. In addition, the public was invited to submit comments
about the standards to our agency’s website. The standards committee
carefully considered these comments, along with those from you and several
other invited reviewers. The second draft of the standards is now
available at our website at http://education.state.mn.us
and is also attached to this message as a PDF file.
If it is at all possible for you to take some time during this busy
season to review the second draft, we would once again welcome your
comments. We would truly appreciate any feedback you can offer by January
16, 2004. (We’ll leave it to you to decide the level of
specificity you can provide given the time frame). And once again, we ask
permission to share your feedback with the public, should the commissioner
decide to post all reviewer’s comments on our website. Copies of this
invitation and the standards will be mailed to you this week, should you
have problems downloading them from our website.
Please let me know as soon as possible if you will be able to review
our second draft. Also please let me know if we have permission to post
your comments, any fee that we should pay for your services, and any
questions you have.
Again, on behalf of the children of Minnesota, thank you for your
willingness to help us in this most important endeavor.
Beth Aune
Director, Division of Academic Standards & Professional
Development
Minnesota Department of Education
1500 Highway 36 West, Roseville, MN 55113-4266
T: 651/582-8751 F: 651/582-8876
beth.aune@state.mn.us |